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A Poem
Oct 05 2006 07:59pm

Ed Hunter
 - Student
Ed Hunter
As Saz said, posting right here))
Well, actually that's a song. I suppose our band and I should upload it soon (well..when we got it recorded:P) but anyway those lyrics were written by Eddeh(by me if you didn't got it:P)As far as the record is ready you shall know my composers' genius!! (oh..i think I should be more modest..and..tshh! don't tell other band members about it, ok?)
Tell me what d'u think about it.

Listening to the wind
that was passing by
Waiting for the sun
And for the rays divine

Crying in solitude
Coz I'm misunderstood
Lying alone on the sand

Standing at the point of no return
Feel the cold winters' winds blow
Withought a thought where I have to go
But I know I have to carry on

Listening to new old songs
And forgotten tales
Dreaming of iternal life
That will never end

Crying in agony
Dying of sanity
Walking below burning skyes


Standing at the point of no return
Feel the cold winters' winds blow
Withought a thought where I have to go
But I know I have to carry on
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Oct 05 2006 10:07pm

Maher
 - Jedi Knight
 Maher

Standing by the window

Eyes upon the moon

Hoping that the memory

will leave her spirit soon



She shuts the doors and lights

And lays her body on the bed

Where images and words are

running deep

She has too much pride to pull

the sheets above her head

So quietly she lays and waits

for sleep



She stares at the ceiling

And tries not to think

And pictures the chains

She's been trying to link again

But the feeling is gone



And water can't cover her

memory

And ashes can't answer her

pain

God give me the power to take

breath from a breeze

And call life from a cold metal

frame



In with the ashes

Or up with the smoke from the

fire

With wings up in heaven

Or here, lying in bed

Palm of her hand to my head

Now and forever curled in my

heart

And the heart of the world



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Dream Theater
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